I feel the force as the waves crash against the shores.
They sooth my mind, hushing my thoughts.
As I look out into the vast water,
I am small,
My problems are insignificant,
The darkness dissolves the tears.
The world is bigger, its better than where I am at this moment,
At this time.
Helpful to have the picture here. The poem reveals a lot of emotion. Great!
ReplyDeleteHeavy stuff. The picture helps a lot and the overall poem is very powerful.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you describe the waves and the picture helps piece it all together.
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